Second pass pick-ups... minutiae? All right, I have my notes from my recent listen through. I missed this thread when it first went up, but I'm here now.
Sergeant Michael Cross got promoted after getting to Ft. Irwin:
His wiki lists his rank as SGT/E-5 and way back in Ch. 3 (3/3 @ 21:21) When he meets Burt for the first time, he addresses Michael as "Buck Sergeant." Buck Sergeant is a sometimes derogatory, sometimes term of endearment for E-5's. Much later in Ch. 33, (1/3 @ 24:09) he calls Carl and identifies himself as Staff Sergeant, an E-6.
When CPL Puck is being a jerk, he isn't that big of a jerk:
When correcting a newbie he says "Out falcon standing." (CH. 33 1/3 @ 4:25)
(Bonus points if you know why I highlighted it in blue.)
Early signs of the Inklings/ADLO's/Numbered Ones:
In Ch. 10 (1/3 @ 6:24) was that squeaking glass or whining?
More talking zombies:
From Lizzy's audio journal... after she gets dragged out of the truck and the recording trails off, you can hear something say "Go" or "No."
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